Loudt Darrow
Feb 9, 2023

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Lol Amber, even though you monumentally missed the point, you're actually right in a way. That line sucks.

I should've gone for something like "repurpose their wombs into coworking offices," perhaps "watercooler halls" or "conference rooms."

"Walk-in closets" doesn't evoke the target imagery at all, which is women focusing on their careers.

And I use the womb because we're also talking about babies. So I'm juxtaposing babies with careers.

Get it?

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Loudt Darrow
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